Hello Angel, I like the way you described the main facts about your learning.But I think you could probably work harder on your description.A description is a paragraph of 3 or 2 sentences the describe your learning , who you did it with and how to did it.All though I really like your work , and maybe if you a descriptions to your learning , you could be ready for my year.. Constance
Hello Angel,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you described the main facts about your learning.But I think you could probably work harder on your description.A description is a paragraph of 3 or 2 sentences the describe your learning , who you did it with and how to did it.All though I really like your work , and maybe if you a descriptions to your learning , you could be ready for my year..
Constance