Monday, December 5, 2016

IALT: Use powerful words to describe a setting

writing words about the earthquake


Find 5 words you found in the blogpost that were new to you. Record these, and find the meaning.
An example has been done for you.
You can add an image if you want to.
chaotic
When something is very busy, lots of people are there, maybe everyone is confused.
After shock
sitting
shaking
swaying
felt
powerful
Moving
building
something
shock
Find a phrase that you didn’t know, or helped create a picture in your head. Find out what it means.
An example has been done for you.
You can add an image if you want to.
as if the ground had turned to liquid.
This helped me create a picture in my head of the ground turning from solid to liquid. In my head I couldn’t stand up anymore, I was falling over and all the stuff around me fell to the ground as well. Everything was moving.




write a poem or a story about the earthquakes.


Write a poem about earthquakes.
Maybe an acrostic poem, or any other type of poem you want.

Try to use powerful words from the video, like these
  • Desperate
  • Disorganised
  • Dig frantically in hope
  • A community overwhelmed
  • A mound of rubble
  • Catastrophe

Start here: Earthquake

In iron there was A earthquake it was so bad i was watching a video it was about the most powerful  earthquake in the world,and there was sumange everyone was so frightened when they saw it.Everything was damaged some people died and some people survivors most of the children were dead i was so sad i imagined if was me,we are so lucky have a earthquake like that.   

Thursday, December 1, 2016

celebrating Me!!

This term we have been inquiring into 'Celebrating Me'. We have been looking at lots of different celebrations, like Guy Fawkes, Halloween, Weddings and Birthdays, White Sunday, Diwali and more. We also have looked at celebrating our own selves. 
This means we thought about things about ourselves that are worth celebrating... like our family, our hobbies, our learning achievements, our culture.

Here is my DLO to show what I have done throughout the term.



Wednesday, November 30, 2016

De Bono's thinking hats

EOTC Recount

WALT: use time words in a recount
SC: I can highlight 5 time words I have used in my recount

Instructions: You must write a recount about what you did last week for EOTC week.
A recount is a story about something that has already happened - something in the past.
In recounts, we use words like
  • First
  • Next
  • Then
  • Afterwards
  • Before
  • Later on
  • And days of the week - Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday, Friday

Your task is to write a recount about your week. You can add pictures if you want to.
Before posting on your blog, highlight any time words you have used. You MUST use at least 5 of these.

For your blog:
Labels - tps, year4, writing
Title: WALT use time words in a recount



Start writing here:On Tuesday we went to mini golf, but we went in groups i was in Mr M’s group.We had to stay with our adot at all times,and when we got there we were playing and Alyssa was in my group we were the only girls in the group Alyssa did not have a tern but i did no why.Than afterwards she was playing, than when we all were finished all of us got a ice cream but it was for $2.00 or $1.00 i did not get one because i did not have any money so i just got in a line and just sit there and not talking, and we went,latter on i was waiting and waiting for them to be finish and we went in the bus when everyone was done eating their ice cream because you are not allowed to eat in the school bus and we went first to go in the bus.Then when we were in the school bus Mr.M said that i won,I thought that he was lying but i said can i see it than he gave it to me and when i looked at it he was telling the truth i was so happy that i won,but the best part was when we were working as a team.

Thursday, November 24, 2016

WALT when we get excited and it is time we don't push we go in line.


On wednesday the 23th our teacher miss Ashley ‘’said’’ after lunch time we are going to do the slip & slid’’and my class was shouting mabe the whole world could hear us.Then when it was morning tea the boys from room 8 were setting up the slip & slid and room 6,7,and 8 was so excited about it, so the toke there Te-shirt off and was going to jump on the slide but it was not lunchtime yet so i put it back on.Then the ball rang when i put my Te-shirt than the ball rang again and i ‘’said’’ that means it is lunch time then everyone went in a line and jumped in the slip and slid.

Tuesday, November 22, 2016

WALT learn how to mini golf.

On Tuesday 29th November


Room 6,7,and 8 went to Orakei it is the name of the mini golf.When i came to school i gave my teacher $8.00 for the trip but when i gave it is miss Sharon she said it was $50 dolos, but the notis that my teacher gave me said that you have to pay $8.00 than my teacher said it is hard to take you if you have payed $8.00 but when mrs kelly came Mrs Kelly just said take her than i was so relieved that she said to take me.After that i was in Mr M’s group we were playing than when we were done he said let's go get a feed so we went,and we were don eating and we got on the bus and he said that i won and i thought he was lying but when i looked at it he was telling the truth i was so so happy that i won than we went back to school.

Monday, November 21, 2016

what we did on EOCT day.


Today i did not go to EOCT because my dad forgot to pay so we were making a birthday card for mrs Sharma and than miss Ashley went to get a cake at morning tea time.She said go to miss Area than she said to go to mr m than we were playing basketball and we came to class and watch movies.  

Wednesday, November 16, 2016

school values

digital citizen

     

Digital Citizen

Citizens means like people does belong in a place like a house your own house.
Digital Citizens means like they help you on internet and on your phone too. Digital citizens people on Digital world.   
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emotive words when on a roller coaster.

my celebration is samoan wedding

WALT learn about christmas

How to make a dumper Truck.

How to make a dumper Truck.

You will need
  • 1 longer cereal box
  • 2 small cereal boxes
  • Shoe box lid
  • Thin strip of blue paper
  • 4 bottle tops
  • Red and yellow paint to decorate
  • 4 round lids
  • Scrunched up newspaper
  • Grey point
  • Black point
  • Sticky tope.




2)Stick it on top of the longer cereal box.
4)Stick a shoebox lid on the highest part of the truck
5)Stick a strip of blue paper just underneath the roof
6)Stick two bottle tops onto the lower front of the truck


How to blow the best bubble gum.

How to blow a bubble


Instructions

  • Stick your tang in the whole of the bubble.
  • Breath in the bubble with a slow breath.
  • Try and do it with a friend or one of your family.


Tips

  • Use sugar-free gum the less sugar in your gum,the stronger it’ll be.
  • To perfect large bubble,practice indoors.




Thank you for reading this.




Tuesday, November 15, 2016

WALT make a net into a cube.


hi this is my cube and my teacher gave us a net and said cut it and see what it would tern into and i made a little tiny cube.

Thursday, November 10, 2016

this is me when it is my birthday this is me.


Today miss Ashley showed us lots of tips and tricks for using Google Drawing to make our pictures look amazing.We learnt about -Cropping Tool(this lets you cut part of the picture out)-Resizing(making a picture smaller or bigger)-Masking(making a picture fit  inside a shape like an circle or a heart)Red Marker Lines(so the picture is in the middle of the page)-PNG FILES(drag and drop) (We have to use PNG so they don't have ugly background,PNG has no background)-Grouping(This lets you kind of glue two picture together to make one picture)-Text(rotating text)

WALT learn about bok choy.

Tuesday, November 8, 2016

Food and Treats

Today in this block, we had got given a book to read with a buddy in Room 6. The book we got given was Food and Treats and the book was full of heaps of ideas but here is the things we had read about in the book.
  • Hundreds And Thousands
  • Whipped Cream
  • Dessert Jelly
  • Soft Drinks
  • And Chocolate & Chip Cookies
The thing that was mostly important in the book was How hundreds and thousands were made, How dessert jelly goes wobbly and How you melt the butter to make the cookie chewier. The book was really interesting to read because we found out things we didn't even know but now that we had read the book, we know what the special things are in food and treats. Everyone has a favourite food treat but I wonder what is the science behind making them ??. In the book, a food manufacturer opens doors to reveal some of the secrets behind making these popular and yummy treats. But in this book, you will learn the difference between natural and processed sugar and how you can eat sweet food. From my point of view, don't eat too much sweets because it is not healthy for you.
My buddies point of view : Don't eat too much lollies because it is not good for your teeth

Here is a photo of the book we have read !!!





















Here is a photo of me and my buddy !!!

Friday, November 4, 2016

walt writing with powerful words.

One halloween night Jack was scaring his little sister April she was 5 years old his brother jack was saying if you go to sleep the big scary monster will kill you and eat you, when you're dead he is going to eat you for dinner tonight.Then when mum said go to sleep and April said can i sleep with you for the night and mum said you are getting older sleep in your room ok and she said ok mum and she went in her room and she was sleeping for one hour and when she woke up it was still nighttime and one big hand came out the hand looked like a big foots hand and she streamed like she was suffering.Her brother came in as fast as a cheater and he called the police than the police came and they were bringing a big clinic so the monster can go in it and they shoot him and tolk him in the clinic and he stayed there forever.    
One halloween night Jack was scaring his little sister April she was 5 years old his brother jack was saying if you go to sleep the big scary monster will kill you and eat you, when you're dead he is going to eat you for dinner tonight.Then when mum said go to sleep and April said can i sleep with you for the night and mum said you are getting older sleep in your room ok and she said ok mum and she went in her room and she was sleeping for one hour and when she woke up it was still nighttime and one big hand came out the hand looked like a big foots hand and she streamed like she was suffering.Her brother came in as fast as a cheater and he called the police than the police came and they were bringing a big clinic so the monster can go in it and they shoot him and tolk him in the clinic and he stayed there forever.    
One halloween night Jack was scaring his little sister April she was 5 years old his brother jack was saying if you go to sleep the big scary monster will kill you and eat you, when you're dead he is going to eat you for dinner tonight.Then when mum said go to sleep and April said can i sleep with you for the night and mum said you are getting older sleep in your room ok and she said ok mum and she went in her room and she was sleeping for one hour and when she woke up it was still nighttime and one big hand came out the hand looked like a big foots hand and she streamed like she was suffering.Her brother came in as fast as a cheater and he called the police than the police came and they were bringing a big clinic so the monster can go in it and they shoot him and tolk him in the clinic and he stayed there forever.    


Wednesday, November 2, 2016

My opinion after reading this article.

Roller coasterI would love to go on a roller coaster because i have not been on one before.Now after reading this article i would never go on one in my life because it is deadly and fast and so terrified but the other people might think that it is awsone and fun and they say that it is super and funny when they go up down up and down it sounds fun but i will never go on one in my life.



Thursday, October 27, 2016

learning to have fun in class.

in my class we were having a cherish hunt outside and there were 6 groups and the other group was finding another groups chocolate they hend it some where know one could find it or see it we can not cheat in thing game because that is the rules.

Thursday, October 20, 2016

Evidence of my writing learning

We did a practice test then our teachers gave us feedback. Here is my writing with the teachers feedback. This is evidence of my learning.






Wednesday, October 12, 2016

WALT learn about a photo and disturb about that photo

One cleaning day


Mum said to John go and get the broom it is cleaning day we are going to move away tomorro  but it was school so mum had to clean the house by herself.So john went to school and said to his teacher i am moving away tomorro the teacher said why beacuse i hsve to move in with my dad and the teacher was very sad beacuse he was the smartist boy in the class so he had the best time of his life at his school before he moves tomorro to his dad.Then it was 3.oo oclock so he had to go and when he got home his dad was at home so they went to their new home.When they got there they packed their stuff and john went to a new school it did not feel the same like his old school so school was done he got home with his bike and the house was on fire and the faterfighter was trying to take the fire out.The next day john went back too his old school and he was back too happyness.

Monday, September 12, 2016

Describing what is in the video and write it and make it like a story

Today we had to write about a short clip we watched. Our goal was to describe IN DETAIL what we saw. This was just a practice so then when we wrote our own stories, we know how to write in detail and don't forget to leave things out. It helps the reader get a picture in their head, like a movie, of what I am writing.

This is the clip we used.
(Only the first 1 minute - about the boy sleeping through his alarms)



This is what I wrote.   The gentle breeze blow through the open window.The curtains swayed so  safely.There was a dark gray speaker there was a clock in it the time was 6:59 then it turned to 7:00 and it said good morning.The volume went up and a nice steady jam came on and it died,someone turned it off and it was a boy,he jumped on the smooth bed and his head on the dark blew pelow. After that the clock on his phone rang and rang when he was not looking he reached out for the phone he was trying to look for it and he got it he turned it off it slept out of his hand because he was fulling asleep.So the 3ed clock went on it was so so loud he was so angry he turned around and got his gun from under his pelow could bb gun he got it and he shoot the bullet at it and it went off.Now the gun slept off his hand again.So when he dropped the gun all of the clocks went on it was super loud because the all rang and rang.he was more angrier than before.
than he got out off bed and smashed everything all of the clocks that were on.He did it very fast than got in bed and the plankt landed on him nice and clear.

His foot was squishy he went under his plankt he was shaking he got out off bed and and smashed everything very fast he went back to bed the plankt landed on him

Do you think I have described what happened in lots of detail?
Please leave me a comment to let me know if I did achieve my goal or not. Attachments area Preview YouTube video Alarm Alarm

Tuesday, August 30, 2016

The Nervous System,
 The Nervous System Sends a message to your whole body & it will function your body.Your bran message your body to move.

The Digestive System,
The Digestive System means when you eat it comes out of your organs.

The muscular system,
The muscular system means when you exercise and your muscle big and strong in your body.  

Monday, August 29, 2016

WALT:i am learning about private and public information.

i am leaning to do a good story in my classroom.

A long time ago,when a mother loved a boy very,very much.His name was Loka,he was her son,he had to go to his kingdom he was in his mother kingdom.He had to but his mother said why & he said but god said to go to my kingdom’’why would god say to leave their family, but he said i just have to so he went off with his horse.He was so sad but he had to.

WALT: learn about insects and birds and cacts.

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Friday, August 26, 2016

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Once there was a girl named Ana.She went to a scary twirly  slide.She went by herself.It was the scaryst slide ever.

So she got a yellow bout and she went in the tanal and she slipped and hit her gluseyesmaxsames on the bout and she speeded down she thought that it was not scary.She went in circles and it was done

Tuesday, August 16, 2016


On a big narstie day Max went on a holladay. He ran to the sea the smallest sea in the world and he saw a bout he thought that it was a nice day but the other people ‘said ‘NO WE DO NOT WANT TO COME WITH YOU he did not know why they think that it is a big narstie day. So he went by himself because everyone said NO to him so he went. When he went on the bout he was fishing,then he got a big fish but he saw a little green tail. But when he pulled it up it was a little crocodile.

walt to see what is the powerful world.

WALT: See if the flame can go on or not if there is Oxygen

Monday, August 15, 2016

Cybersmart week 4

WALT i am learning to shortcuts to use my netbook efficiently.

Control + tab is to change between tabs
Control + 9 shows you your most recent tab.

Highlighting a word, right clicking and clicking ‘research’ opens a mini Google search inside Drawing. You can drag photos over. Dragging the little triangle at the bottom of the drawing changes the size of the page

Image result for control button

Thursday, June 9, 2016

Remember to make a copy of this document. On your copy, put your name in the document title so it says ‘Angel class site treasure hunt’ and put it in your Cybersmarts folder.


Question
Answer
1
What day do we have Kiwisport (gymnastics?)
The day of kiwisport is on friday i found it in weekly timetable.

2
Write down everyone in the Circles group for maths.
Lopiseni kardell eve maria joshua wesley isaia saia Dziah mojtaba hope.T.  wiki rawiri denzel.
I found it in maths
3

How many hearts are there on the Kia Manawanui tree on the homepage?
18 i found  it in kia ora site.
4
What time is lunchtime?

12 a’cklock i found it in weekly timetable.
5
What was the name of Room 6’s last blog post?

Room 6 blog post kia manawanui
6
Which group is Hiria in for reading?

Kowhai

7
Name one follow up task for writing.


Room 6 class site kia manawanui
8

When was the last date Miss Ashley posted on the class blog? What was the post  about?


Last week .
9

What day of the week do we have music?

Every friday.
10
Find out what Miss Ashley’s favourite food is.
Hint: look on the ‘about us’ heart.
Shu she







What is miss Ashley’s favorite color




It is purple