Wednesday, April 12, 2017

Breaking news


this is my work in room 8 it is breaking news about a fountain in Wellington
i hope you liked reading this it like tolk me like 2 minutes to do this so yeah,if you like it thank you and if you don't pls leave a comment to tell me what i did not add in this work.

Friday, April 7, 2017



this is a video by Angel and S.L and lydia this is about goosebumps most wanted it was a little bit scary when we were reading it but it was cool when we got to know so yeah,so if you were watching this pls leave a coment

Thursday, April 6, 2017

walt sail on the water

on wednesday 6th on april 2017 half of room 7 and room 8 went to sailing,and there were 12 kids so Miss Fepuleai had 4 kids and Mrs Kelly had 4 kids and Miss Ashley had 4,

I was with  Miss Ashley,it was me Auckland,Faka'ata,Lopi,i was the only girl kid in the car that was why i had to sit in the front.When  Miss Ashley was driving she was driving fast like the wind i said to slow down but she said That we were late because of Lopi, he had to change a lot and we had to wait for Fakalata mum to get his togs but it was finally over.


so that was why  Miss Ashley was driving so fast, Miss Ashley was confused where to go she was trying to use her GPS was not working  so she called Mrs Fepuleai but she was not answering her phone, so she called Mrs Kelly BUT she was not answering her phone too.But in 2 minutes Mrs Fepuleai called and tolled her the way.when  Miss Ashley parked the car i saw 2 men and their names were Kevin and Robin the instrader was Robin he showed us how to us the bout.

My buddy was Hiria we went in the water but we had to go by one by one we went 2ed and when we went on there was a rope on out bout and Robin and i bout too he tied it onto his bout and tolk us to a pontoon and  he got the other kids.than when everyone was here he tolk 4 bout it was my bout and he was moving around and then he stopped i yelled ''why did you stop'' and he yelled ''i am going to let you go now and everybody got scared but me and my buddy was doing just fine we went really far than it was raining,i could not see properly.

when we were done robin toled us one person go in the front and that was me and he said to lean over than i did and the bout fleped over and i was really thought that i was go ti drowen but we had i life jakit on so i can swim and everone had a go than we we to change and get dry and had lunch and went back ti school i thought was super super fun.



Thursday, March 30, 2017

Tuesday T1W9 Reading activity

this is my work on Tuesday i had to do this for 3 days but it is finally finished.
The video was really interesting it is the first learning video i like to listen too.

Monday, March 27, 2017

WALT working together as a team

On Monday kiwisport got canceled so Miss Ashley and Miss Morison decided that Rm 7 vs Rm 8 at line basketball.

I thought Rm 7 was going to play with just us but Rm8 wanted to play with us so Miss Ashley had an idea it was Rm 7 (the best class) and Rm 8 (the 2ed best)
Will vs each other.

Rm 7 flowed Rm 8 to the court Miss Ashley said get in arder it had to be boy girl boy girl because the boys were talking at each other.


We started playing the game it was my turn and when I went up i was so scared it was like i was standing in front of 2,000 people but it was not really scary when i had the ball.


We finished at 12.27 we won we had 3 points and Rm 8 had 1 we were humble winners and Rm 8 were gracious losers we had lots of fun i hope we do that again.

Marking my story!
Ideas
Structure and Language
Organisation
Vocabulary
Sentence Structure
Spelling
Punctuation
R3
R2
R2
R3
R3
R2
R2
Total score (add the numbers next to the R’s altogether)
17
My E-asttle score is … (click here and see what your score is)
1A

Thursday, March 16, 2017

WALT self -check our stories using a rubric.

The story i wrote on Monday

Monday 13th march 2017

Today in room 7 Miss Ashley showed us a box she said ‘’what is this’’ and my whole class yelled it was a box it was made out of recycled coke box she said ‘’no this is not just a box it is my magic box’’ and she told us what to do.


She told us that she was going to chose someone to come up.She is going to blindfold them,after that when she blindfold’s that person the person she is going to put something in the magic box and she chose Syraiah-lee, she got blindfolded and Miss Ashley put mustard in the box.

She was scared like she was going to full of a cliff.When she put her hand in the box she squealed ewww!! and the class was laughing,she could not get what it was so she said ‘’can you just tell me what it is?


After her turn it was finally my turn i went up with coffedents but as soon the blindfold went on my eyes i felt like the world disappeared i was a little scared when everyone yelled wooooooo!! I was frightened because it might be something disgusting i put my shaky hand in the bowl, I put my hand in and i just yelled ‘’ewwwww! What the what is this it felt like jel and cream and the color was white, my hand was hard to move my hand in.Miss Ashley gave me a hint she said ‘’most man use it’’ this was going to be hard so i just gave up and i took the blind off and it was shaving foam.



It was so fun i wish we can do that again but with food only.  
         



The story i edit on Tuesday
Monday 13th march 2017

Today in room 7 Miss Ashley showed us a box she said ‘’what is this’’ and my whole class yelled it was a box it was made out of recycled coke box she said ‘’no this is not just a box it is my magic box’’ and she told us what to do.

She told us that she was going to chose someone to come up.She is going to blindfold them,after that when she blindfold’s that person the person she is going to put something in the magic box and she chose Syariah-lee, she got blindfolded and Miss Ashley put mustard in the box.

She was scared like she was going to full of a cliff.When she put her hand in the box she squealed ewww!! and the class was laughing,she could not get what it was so she said ‘’can you just tell me what it is? As I stood waiting, my heart was beating fast.        

After her turn it was finally my turn i went up with coffedents but as soon the blindfold went on my eyes i felt like the world disappeared i was a little scared when everyone yelled wooooooo!! I was frightened because it might be something disgusting i put my shaky hand in the bowl, I put my hand in and i just yelled ‘’ewwwww! What the what is this it felt like jel and cream and the color was white, my hand was hard to move my hand in.Miss Ashley gave me a hint she said ‘’most man use it’’ this was going to be hard so i just gave up and i took the blind off and it was shaving foam.Ew.



It was so fun i wish we can do that again but with food only.  

Sentence starters to use:
  • As I stood waiting, my heart was
  • I put my hand nervously into the box, and I felt
  • When Miss Ashley put the blindfold on, it felt like
  • The class giggled as

Did I remember to include….
Yes
Title
Yes
Introduction
Yes
Who, what, when, where, why, how
Yes
3 paragraphs - burger model
Yes
Conclusion - my own thinking/reflection
Yes
Specific adjectives
Yes
Simile/Metaphor
Yes
Different punctuation
Yes
Short sentence for effect
Yes
Correct spelling throughout the story
Yes
A sentence you have added in editing
Yes
A sentence you have moved in editing
Yes  
Sentence starters given



         

Friday, March 10, 2017

rubbish rap

Okey excuse Tamaki
we should all pick our rubbish
but we should all be together
Thats a blog we can publish
okey i heard we can work and be a team maybe we should go pick up some rubbish at the stream.see i don’t care about bullies i care about the rubbish fully,

By Angel and Edith

Wednesday, March 8, 2017

WALT use expression when we read - Reflection

Smarty Pants group week 6 I think i need more fluency when i read. I need more expression. I need to read faster not slower. I ‘’need’’ to know when it is my turn to speak because sometimes i just daydreaming and forget about my reading.

WALT structure our paragraph using the burger modal



The Hamburger paragraph
we were learning about the topic, 3 supporting sentence,and a concluding sentence we were talking about it and we had to talk about it or write about it this is a video of me talking about

The Hamburger paragraph

Friday, February 24, 2017

Game Review


WALT: I am learning to critically evaluate a game

Your name:

I played the game: Cranium
Made by:Richard Tait and Whit Alexander.
I played this game with:Coralee


The purpose of this game is to (Hint: how do you win this game?):well me and Coralee were play and you have to chose a person and there was a play doh but it was dry so it rain and you need a color dise and if you get a color you have to go on it and there is a time and if the time runs out and the person has passed the brain than she/he has to get the brain and say i won.


My favourite thing about this game was:that if you win you get to hold the brain

One thing I didn’t like about this game was:is when you eat the brain

This game is good to play by with a group because there are more people it said you have to have 5 people/4 people,but i just did 2 player.



I would rate this game _5_ out of 10 because:i lost and i got to eat the brain but said to play another game but Coralee said no so i had to eat it but i did not eat it.

If I could recommend something to make this game better, it would be:



Add any other comments about this game here:it was so fun but i will try and not eat the brain.

whanau confrace


At whanau conference i was the post to come at 3.50 but my brother Micah he brang the time for me from his teacher so we came at that time.We came at 4.00 o’clock  and my mum came to my class and my teacher miss Ashley talked about how i am and she said thing about my learning than when we were done we got a notice and my mum sighed it,the notice is about miss Ashley can take me to a lak and we are going to adomed the creek,she can take me whenever she wants so my mum sighed it and we were done so we went home and watch moana.

Softball Tournament

On wednesday 22ed feb 2017
some of room 10 kids and some of room 8 and 7 and some of room 9 kids we had to go to our softball tournament we had to walk because the softball bus was $500 so we had to walk,it was not that far we went on a fiaud called done coert.

We were vsing Pont England A and we lost but we tried.than we lined up and high fived each other and we were saying good try,than when we were finished we went and ate and we went to paradise our throwing.We won’t aloud to bat because we might hit a window,but i was just waiting for my dad to come.

Than we went up and went to vs Pont England B and we lost again so we went to stone fired and we won it was the greatest feeling ever that we won and at the end of the finose we won again.

We came to the finose and we were vs stone fired again i had a great feeling about this and when we baited i saw my dad coming and he was going to watch me bat and when i baited it it went a little bit far and i ran it the 1st bas and i stand there because they were going to get me than every other people baited and we won again it was amazing but we came 3ed place but it was fun.

Thursday, February 9, 2017

it is just about me

the drought




Quote from story
Your response - how does she feel? Why do you think that?
“I swallow my groan” (page 2)
(Example)
She feels bored and hot. I think that because people normally groan when they don’t like what is happening, so maybe she was bored in class and didn’t want to do what the teacher asked. The drought meant that the weather would be really hot.
“I flop across my desk like a dead fish” (page 2)
She feels so sad and bored.I think she is sad and bored because her mum passed away.
“Since Mum died, I’ve been staying over at Pete’s house until Dad gets home from work” (page 3)
She feels uncodable and then happy when she's playing at Pete's house so she can forget about her mum dying.
“We roar and scream like a crowd at a rugby match when someone scores a try” (page 4)
She feels happy because she is playing and not remembering her mum dying she is just having too much fun.
“I wait for him to tell me to dig deep. I wait for him to tell me to use my imagination - but I guess it was Mum who said things like that.” (page 5)
She feels sad because her dad does not
tell her to dig down but it  is just her mum telling her that.
“Dad still hasn’t eaten anything, and there are big black bags under his eyes” (page 5)
She feels sorry for her dad because he just came from work and it is hard without her mum.
“I pick up my pen and, trying not to think of Dad asleep at the table, or Mum dying, or the skinny sheep, I close my eyes” (page 6)
She feels stressed out because she is not trying to think of her dad sleeping on the table and her mum dying.


Reread this quote from page 6. Reflect on what hidden meaning is there.


“This time the story comes, but the drought in the story is dad’s. Like the ever-blue sky, he’s holding back tears. From time to time, a small cloud drifts by, but he blinks it away. Each time he does this, his sadness grows deeper. All he does is get up and go to work and come home and go to bed. Then one night, he falls into such a deep sleep, a cloud creeps by without him noticing. Then another comes, and another, and another. Fat white clouds at first, then grey ones, then black - and the blackest clouds are bursting with rain. The moment they burst, Dad cries.” (page 6)


Think about the questions below and write a paragraph (at least 100 words) to answer these questions. You can talk to a buddy about it, but use your own words.
  • Why is dad holding back tears?
  • Why does he blink away the clouds?a cloud creeps by without him noticing
  • Why is his sadness growing deeper?
  • way than she will cry.
  • What metaphor is the girl trying to explain by talking about the clouds?
  • Why might the clouds start off white, then next go grey, then next go black? What metaphor is the girl trying to explain?

Start writing here:

Dad is sad because he is just upset that his wife has passed away.

why is his sadness growing deeper?it is because if her daughter sees him crying in a deep


FAST FINISHERS
Read this article.
Answer the questions below.

Question
Answer
What part of Rosalie’s Hauora was affected by the bullying? Explain what you mean by that.
She feel sad mad at them and if they say something very mean to you you feel so upset.
When did the bullying start, and what happened?
It started when she  first started school they were kicking and pulling her hair
What does this mean?
I only got bullied verbally but it was still very hurtful.”
When someone says bad things with their words it is very hurtful.
Why do you think Rosalie didn’t tell anyone she was being bullied?

Find 3 pieces of advice Rosalie gives to everyone reading that they can do to get help if they are getting bullied
  1.  
  2.  
this is my interview about drought.